(Dance/Electronic) Cloud 9

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Danception
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Post 15 Jul 2024

A dance track i created in Reason called Cloud 9 if you like it please follow my soundcloud and if you have any feedback please feel free to share your advice


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EnochLight
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Post 15 Jul 2024

Danception wrote:
15 Jul 2024
and if you have any feedback please feel free to share your advice
Feels a little tinny on the high end. Might want to tame that with some EQ...
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Post 16 Jul 2024

I like the idea of this track and the sounds work well with each other.

Personally i feel it is missing some percussion (hats, rides) and perhaps the individual sounds could be better balanced in the mix. At times the vocal for example was a bit buried and could be brought forward a bit more.

PhillipOrdonez
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Post 16 Jul 2024

Mix needs improvement. Piano is too loud in relation to other elements. But as Popey said this is a nice, poppy, chill vibes piece 👍

Can't place where i know the vocal sample from. Bugs me when i know i know a sound but can't remember where from 🤔

Danception
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Post 31 Jul 2024

EnochLight wrote:
15 Jul 2024
Danception wrote:
15 Jul 2024
and if you have any feedback please feel free to share your advice
Feels a little tinny on the high end. Might want to tame that with some EQ...
thanks for the feedback mate ill get to work on that

Danception
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Post 31 Jul 2024

Popey wrote:
16 Jul 2024
I like the idea of this track and the sounds work well with each other.

Personally i feel it is missing some percussion (hats, rides) and perhaps the individual sounds could be better balanced in the mix. At times the vocal for example was a bit buried and could be brought forward a bit more.
thank you for genuinely taking the time to listen mate.. thats correct there arent many percussive elements within the track and 100% you are spot on about the vocals ill try and start experimenting more with percussive elements and try my best to balance mix mix

Danception
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Post 31 Jul 2024

PhillipOrdonez wrote:
16 Jul 2024
Mix needs improvement. Piano is too loud in relation to other elements. But as Popey said this is a nice, poppy, chill vibes piece 👍

Can't place where i know the vocal sample from. Bugs me when i know i know a sound but can't remember where from 🤔
cheers for taking the time to listen mate … ill work on the mix and get the hi ends and piano sorted … the vocal sample i believe is a splice sample

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