[Electronic Pop] Comensams - Reflexion X

[Heigen5]

A melodic electronic pop-song with a fresh angle.

[Superology]

Radio song but without any hooks.

[Heigen5]

Radio song but without any hooks.

Thanks for your feedback. I almost never build up songs in a way, so there has to be hooks or any other song-structures as a must. But you might be right that THIS song woulda benefit from a hook.

[Quarmat]

I agree with Superology, this track could very much use a hook. I say so bc the song has very good contemporaty pop elements that make it stand out among similar tracks, but a more powerful hook/chorus than the "those beautiful comensams of mine" is needed. I mean: the words are ok, just the energy of that chorus isn't enough. On the production side I can't really find issues. It sound so clear and tight. I wish I knew how to achieve this.

[Heigen5]

I agree with Superology, this track could very much use a hook. I say so bc the song has very good contemporaty pop elements that make it stand out among similar tracks, but a more powerful hook/chorus than the "those beautiful comensams of mine" is needed. I mean: the words are ok, just the energy of that chorus isn't enough. On the production side I can't really find issues. It sound so clear and tight. I wish I knew how to achieve this.

Maybe. I made this song for to my brother's son. And "comensams" mean 'toes'. Anyway, the clear and tight sound is due to this effect here (scroll down and see the combi2 mastering plugin) https://www.reflexion-x.com/propellerhe ... fills.html

PS. The mastering combi only needs a ReaXcomp VST which is also free. Otherwise I just had that mastering combi in the use and just mixed as well as possible. This effects has made it very easy to sound top-notch, so do yourself a favor and try it out!