Hi, this is my first post requesting feedback in this forum. Looking for mix/mastering/production feedback. I think that the bass sounds a bit flat (not tonal), blurry and muddy so I am trying to find ways to give that more definition and clarity. Thank you for listening!
(Psychadelic/Alt-Rock) A Series Of Rounds (The Soul Resistor)
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- TritoneAddiction
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Really nice track. I espcially like the when the 1:51 part comes in.
I thought the mix/production sounded fine.
I thought the mix/production sounded fine.
Intresting melody and the noise between, cool guitar and synth melody, I didn´t expect a vocal, cool song. Maybe on some spots the vocal is too low ....or my speakers are not good
- jjpscott01
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This sounds so Cool. I don’t know if you’re familiar with a band from several years ago called “Dredg”, but this sound reminds me of them and that’s definitely a complement. Keep it up
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Thanks everyone for listening and the kind feedback. I finally bought a set of decent monitors and remixed everything. I like the results so far. Let me know what you think!
Hi
I think this is is a nice and interesting composition.
As a feedback on you 'production' question :
I would try to exchange the synthbass with a bass-guitarsound (some of the stocksamples are really good). Connected via the (stock)softube amp will definitly give it another punch and some brightness.
The drums can be cranked up a bit in the overall mix.
I think I would broaden the string-synth, and add some movement to it (little waveshape variation or so and a stereo chorus or delay over it).
Said this, this song is OK in itself and the suggested changes are from my perspective and taste.
Well done
Greetzz
Michel
I think this is is a nice and interesting composition.
As a feedback on you 'production' question :
I would try to exchange the synthbass with a bass-guitarsound (some of the stocksamples are really good). Connected via the (stock)softube amp will definitly give it another punch and some brightness.
The drums can be cranked up a bit in the overall mix.
I think I would broaden the string-synth, and add some movement to it (little waveshape variation or so and a stereo chorus or delay over it).
Said this, this song is OK in itself and the suggested changes are from my perspective and taste.
Well done
Greetzz
Michel
Thanks everyone for all the feedback. I uploaded a new mix using some of your suggestions.
- mimidancer
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It has a Pink Floyd vibe with a Captain Beefheart soul. I think after the chaotic build a modulation would have been nice for the solo. That being said, you know how many guitar players it takes to screw in a lightbulb? 5, 1 to screw it in and 4 to say how they would have done it differently.
Thanks again for the all the feedback! Here is the final mix of this song and it's now available for purchase as well on most streaming platforms.
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