New track cross between yello and kraftwerk

[gritz]

Hi guys would love some feedback on this track
Appreciate any useful critique

[Hoboys]

It's a dance track basically, but there's nothing to dance to. make it 4 on the floor. Like when the kick only hits twice @ 0:19. Just let it keep hitting all the time. This will be the core of the track, then you can build up the movement and progression of the bass.

[PhillipOrdonez]

I am also missing the kick pulsing on this track, gritz. Once that's established, the breaks without it will stand out and there will be flow.

[gritz]

Yeah wasn’t sure what this was becoming - tried not to go down the 4 on the floor beat -

[PhillipOrdonez]

You can try a broken beat!

[raymondh]

You nailed the yello + kraftwerk vibes! I agree with the other folks about a 4 on floor kick. Nice one!

[gritz]

Have taken your advice and changed it up a bit