So I think this is the pop-iest thing I’ve done, maybe my best vocal, although maybe that’s not saying much!... everything done in Reason 11...
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(Pop) The World Outside
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Cool song. I rarely take notice of lyrics in music. But I read the lyrics while listening to the song. Good topic that's worth thinking about.
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Please keep at the pop. You're good at it.
I noticed the next track on SoundCloud is a Depeche Mode cover. And it's starting off well.
I think we'll get along just fine.
I noticed the next track on SoundCloud is a Depeche Mode cover. And it's starting off well.
I think we'll get along just fine.
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Thanks so much for giving it a listen. I appreciate the positive feedback and thanks for taking the time to read the lyrics!TritoneAddiction wrote: ↑03 Jun 2021Cool song. I rarely take notice of lyrics in music. But I read the lyrics while listening to the song. Good topic that's worth thinking about.
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Thanks for listening and the encouragement! I’ll keep slogging at it!integerpoet wrote: ↑03 Jun 2021Please keep at the pop. You're good at it.
I noticed the next track on SoundCloud is a Depeche Mode cover. And it's starting off well.
I think we'll get along just fine.
I noticed you had a dig through a few of my tracks, thanks so much for taking the time!
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Thanks for making tracks worth digging through!man made material wrote: ↑05 Jun 2021I noticed you had a dig through a few of my tracks, thanks so much for taking the time!
I don't visit SoundCloud by habit (yet) but I predict you will have been a good follow when I do visit it.
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Cheers Popey! Go on sing along and clear the room eff em!
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Very cool. Great lyrics!
A proper song! Vocal needs more tonal variation, like what you did on the "don't LOSE..." phrase, because currently you're hitting the same notes in every line. Don't worry, this just comes with a bit more practice. You will almost definitely revisit this song at some point in the future if you continue with the singing because it's solid. Big thumbs up from me!
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Cheers man! I’m still getting confidence in my voice, you’re right though I should push more - though it’s quite limited! baby steps init?!EdwardKiy wrote: ↑11 Jun 2021A proper song! Vocal needs more tonal variation, like what you did on the "don't LOSE..." phrase, because currently you're hitting the same notes in every line. Don't worry, this just comes with a bit more practice. You will almost definitely revisit this song at some point in the future if you continue with the singing because it's solid. Big thumbs up from me!
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