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Skimrok
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11 Sep 2019

Being redone
Last edited by Skimrok on 11 Oct 2020, edited 2 times in total.
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11 Sep 2019

Good one! 👌

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Wav-E
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12 Sep 2019

Intresting crazy tune, I have the feeling that the bass is sometimes not in the same key with the melody
(but I hear now on my notebook at work, you know tiny speakers, maybe I am wrong)
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Skimrok
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14 Sep 2019

cheers buddy let me look, me and keys is something I do struggle with making tunes ,
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MannequinRaces
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14 Sep 2019

Cool track but wrong genre.

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Skimrok
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14 Sep 2019

MannequinRaces wrote:
14 Sep 2019
Cool track but wrong genre.
thank you , may I ask what genre would you call it please?
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14 Sep 2019

Skimrok wrote:
14 Sep 2019
MannequinRaces wrote:
14 Sep 2019
Cool track but wrong genre.
thank you , may I ask what genre would you call it please?
Maybe it is DnB... I'm just used to faster drum beats / breaks and am not hearing those here.

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Skimrok
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04 Dec 2019

ive re gone into this after feedback advice and helpful direction from Wav-E
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Periwinkle
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04 Dec 2019

I like this very much. I'm no expert, but it sure sounds like DnB to me.
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Skimrok
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04 Dec 2019

Periwinkle wrote:
04 Dec 2019
I like this very much. I'm no expert, but it sure sounds like DnB to me.
Thank you :) :thumbs_up: i see your location is London :cool: im down in Kent :puf_wink:
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05 Dec 2019

Sounds good overall.

I think, don't let people get you upset over rigidity about Genre. You do what you do. I definitely heard Bro-Step elements but again, rigidity about genre helps no one.

This may help you with getting a workable sense of Key/Scale: from 7:10 if you are impatient:


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05 Dec 2019

Nice track with some solid ideas. :thumbs_up:
But for me even though the Exorcist samples are cool I thought that they perhaps had a too "scary" tone compared to the rest of the music. But I guess this title 1973 has a connection to the Exorcist theme.

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Skimrok
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05 Dec 2019

cool thanks for the link I check that for sure tonight ;)



TritoneAddiction yeah I did the 1973 title due to what you said the year of the film

I think I leave the samples in now because I have to change the title :lol: but I will test it without the samples in due course with fresh ears ;) :lightbulb: thanks for checking I’m very grateful to you and everyone else at the same time :thumbs_up:
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07 Dec 2019

Da** SkimRok! :shock: - Part at 00:11 is just amazing! I just can't describe how much I like it. Simple, clear and powerful.Too bad the whole track is not as good as that part. But still I like this song. You got one like from me and a repost. Keep it on good work.

:D later that fu** me parts are just over the top. Hehe.

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I listened to all your tracks at your SoundCloud profile but I did not enjoy that much as with the song 1973 Skimrok.
I totally like your dark/sick parts in songs. Hehe.

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Also you got one like and a repost for song Hold Me Close. This song is also amazing. It reminds me of one song in one of MooKee's mixes from some years ago. The mix is called DnB Toasted Dark.
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Skimrok
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08 Dec 2019

Rising Night Wave wrote:
07 Dec 2019
Da** SkimRok! :shock: - Part at 00:11 is just amazing! I just can't describe how much I like it. Simple, clear and powerful.Too bad the whole track is not as good as that part. But still I like this song. You got one like from me and a repost. Keep it on good work.

:D later that fu** me parts are just over the top. Hehe.

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I listened to all your tracks at your SoundCloud profile but I did not enjoy that much as with the song 1973 Skimrok.
I totally like your dark/sick parts in songs. Hehe.

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Also you got one like and a repost for song Hold Me Close. This song is also amazing. It reminds me of one song in one of MooKee's mixes from some years ago. The mix is called DnB Toasted Dark.
Oh cool thanks for the feedback and time in checking my stuff ;) :thumbs_up:
I’m still trying to find myself at the moment and the feedback is very helpful, I will be back on my main computer start of the next week online so I can check out soundcloud because I can’t access it with my phone without being in app mode and I’m useless navigating the site in that mode he!he! Me and technology :lol: :thumbs_up:
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