Just downloaded and listened to 'Time Will Crush You' via one set of my headphones (Sennheiser HD 280 pro)
I have only listened to it once so here are my initial thoughts...
I enjoyed it; reminds me of the the very talented 'Empire Of The Sun' especially the chorus.
Like most listeners I like to be able to hear and understand every word on a first listen rather than thinking 'What did he / she say there?
In my opinion certain elements in the verses are very busy and fighting with the vocals for space especially the purring coiled spring sound which you hear left and right which distracted me away from the vocals to the point where I had to really try and listen to what words you were singing!
Vocals MUST take precedence!
The second verse is more populated than the first verse; setting back elements further in the mix / or muting certain elements in the verses would really make you go 'WOW' when you heard the chorus KICK in! (Less Is More!)
Chord stabs at the end also are too loud and fighting the vocals for space...I would have left these sounds out altogether, it would have mellowed out the song perfectly just like how you mellowed the start of the song into the first verse.
(Wav file could be too compressed for the internet /streaming etc)
Keep up the good work!
Hopefully I will get to listen to all the tracks...