I rather like this.
I think you could take this one of two ways: make it minimal or make it bombastic. Either could be great nut right now it feels frustrating because it is neither.
The guitar melody is great over the subtle chordal shift of the middle of the piece but it takes so long to happen. I think you need to show that melody (or a variation of it) earlier.
The mix also feels a bit confused, almost like you are aware that the elements are lacking so you tried to cover it up. A shame as it makes the ideas feel like they are hidden under creepers.
If you want a hand I am happy to help you with a re-work.
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