(Dance) Stockfish

[tomusurp]

back doing vocals again after spending some months just working on beats. usually i make the whole song but in this rare case i collaborated, me on the vocals and another producer on the beat. any feedback welcome

[WolfZeit]

I'd say this has been a successful collaboration. The vocals have great energy and your production on them has a lovely sizzle. The use of the vocal as percussion is cool. The music sounds great too. Excellent production. The bass pattern/sound is wonderful. I would have loved a big looping vocal crescendo in the break.

[tomusurp]

I'd say this has been a successful collaboration. The vocals have great energy and your production on them has a lovely sizzle. The use of the vocal as percussion is cool. The music sounds great too. Excellent production. The bass pattern/sound is wonderful. I would have loved a big looping vocal crescendo in the break.

thanks i'm looking for ways to make my vocals interesting. my issue is songwriting because i'm so critical of lyrics. wish i didn't care so much about the words

[WolfZeit]

I was going to aks you about the lyrics. I caught a lot of them, but unsure of a few. Do you ever put your lyrics up with a track? I checked your Soundcloud page and saw they're not there.

[tomusurp]

I was going to aks you about the lyrics. I caught a lot of them, but unsure of a few. Do you ever put your lyrics up with a track? I checked your Soundcloud page and saw they're not there.

There’s an option to put in lyrics with my distributor but I’ve never done it

[RTFX]

Funny and funky!
And im a sucker for good arps, so its two thumbs up from me!

[tomusurp]

Funny and funky!
And im a sucker for good arps, so its two thumbs up from me!

Thanks RTFX glad you enjoyed some of the elements