Push Two (tribal melodic techno) what do you think

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moalla
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20 Nov 2023



I hope the mastering sounds right :)

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Mattvank
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22 Nov 2023

The First 17 seconds coming smooth but the Rest sounds ,,unaufgeräumt". Die Flöte könnte mehr Fokus bekommen. Auch plätschert der Bass ohne Variation dahin. Klingt alles in allem mehr nach einer Idee. Die Sounds selber find ich spannend.

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moalla
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23 Nov 2023

Thanks for your reply, A the bassline gets boring with the time accept and like somenone told me it needs more drumbreaks,
das mit dem unaufgeräumt geb ich dir recht, iss aber auch ein bissl Absicht, wenn der Track als Übergang von House nach Techno beim auflegen fungieren soll
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23 Nov 2023

There’s something off with the bass melody it throws me off every time it happens. I would start with fixing that

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