(Industrial/EBM) FHTH - Machinist of The Universe

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FHtH
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Post 12 May 2023



Mixing and mastering in Logic (with RRP) on the desktop.
Video editing in DaVinci on iPad.

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mimidancer
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Post 12 May 2023

For sure has a project pitchfork vibe. That is good IMO. Your lyrical choice was interesting. One does not hear many creationist industrial tunes. Unless you count Gensis by VNV nation. I was happy to hear that the battles were mostly waged in the mind as often evil is a perspective. I am not saying that true evil does not exist, We know there is evil in the world. But theologically speaking two may hold different beliefs and both be good. I enjoyed the vibe of the track. I think the low end could use some subtle saturation. But that comes down to taste in the end. So if that is your flavor don’t change it. cool track.

FHtH
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Post 13 May 2023

mimidancer wrote:
12 May 2023
For sure has a project pitchfork vibe. That is good IMO. Your lyrical choice was interesting. One does not hear many creationist industrial tunes. Unless you count Gensis by VNV nation. I was happy to hear that the battles were mostly waged in the mind as often evil is a perspective. I am not saying that true evil does not exist, We know there is evil in the world. But theologically speaking two may hold different beliefs and both be good. I enjoyed the vibe of the track. I think the low end could use some subtle saturation. But that comes down to taste in the end. So if that is your flavor don’t change it. cool track.
Thank you very much for your feedback. About the lyrics. I am from Ukraine and now we see absolute, undisguised evil. Apocalyptic, without allegories and theological digressions. I really want to believe that all the victims of the heroic Ukraine, soldiers and civilians, are not in vain and will help make our little world a little cleaner and fairer.

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mimidancer
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Post 13 May 2023

FHtH wrote:
13 May 2023
mimidancer wrote:
12 May 2023
For sure has a project pitchfork vibe. That is good IMO. Your lyrical choice was interesting. One does not hear many creationist industrial tunes. Unless you count Gensis by VNV nation. I was happy to hear that the battles were mostly waged in the mind as often evil is a perspective. I am not saying that true evil does not exist, We know there is evil in the world. But theologically speaking two may hold different beliefs and both be good. I enjoyed the vibe of the track. I think the low end could use some subtle saturation. But that comes down to taste in the end. So if that is your flavor don’t change it. cool track.
Thank you very much for your feedback. About the lyrics. I am from Ukraine and now we see absolute, undisguised evil. Apocalyptic, without allegories and theological digressions. I really want to believe that all the victims of the heroic Ukraine, soldiers and civilians, are not in vain and will help make our little world a little cleaner and fairer.
I am from LA, but my parents are from Kyiv. What is happening in Ukraine is heartbreaking. They have been a mess since the invasion began. I can't imagine what it is like to actually be there. I posted a song here a bit back that was inspired by my parent's feelings and memories when the war began. Politics is not allowed on this forum so I will say no more except that I hope this nightmare ends soon. I hope you are well today. Cool track.

daniellemill
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Post 14 May 2023

FHtH wrote:
13 May 2023
mimidancer wrote:
12 May 2023
For sure has a project pitchfork vibe. That is good IMO. Your lyrical choice was interesting. One does not hear many creationist industrial tunes. Unless you count Gensis by VNV nation. I was happy to hear that the battles were mostly waged in the mind as often evil is a perspective. I am not saying that true evil does not exist, We know there is evil in the world. But theologically speaking two may hold different beliefs and both be good. I enjoyed the vibe of the track. I think the low end could use some subtle saturation. But that comes down to taste in the end. So if that is your flavor don’t change it. cool track.
Thank you very much for your feedback. About the lyrics. I am from Ukraine and now we see absolute, undisguised evil. Apocalyptic, without allegories and theological digressions. I really want to believe that all the victims of the heroic Ukraine, soldiers and civilians, are not in vain and will help make our little world a little cleaner and fairer.
Good track! But I think that war is just terrible, you need to develop the economy and improve the welfare of the country! But Ukrainians have good goals to defend their independence!

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Post 14 May 2023

I like this a lot, your vocals sounds great for this style.
Well done!
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FHtH
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Post 14 May 2023

mimidancer wrote:
13 May 2023
I am from LA, but my parents are from Kyiv. What is happening in Ukraine is heartbreaking. They have been a mess since the invasion began. I can't imagine what it is like to actually be there. I posted a song here a bit back that was inspired by my parent's feelings and memories when the war began. Politics is not allowed on this forum so I will say no more except that I hope this nightmare ends soon. I hope you are well today. Cool track.
Thank you very much!
daniellemill wrote:
14 May 2023
Good track! But I think that war is just terrible, you need to develop the economy and improve the welfare of the country! But Ukrainians have good goals to defend their independence!
Thank you so much!
jappe wrote:
14 May 2023
I like this a lot, your vocals sounds great for this style.
Well done!
Thank you so much!

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