(Melodic House/Electronic) Yorkshire Diva

[Popey]

Created for the challenge here: viewtopic.php?f=59&t=7529718

As always any comments appreciated

[rorystorm]

Nice!! Totally made me feel like I was dancing in a forest on mushrooms in 2001 instead of while I'm making breakfast in my sisters kitchen. Tasty break too.

[Rising Night Wave]

this song reminds me a bit of mobi's song go.
nice tune you created.

[Popey]

Nice!! Totally made me feel like I was dancing in a forest on mushrooms in 2001 instead of while I'm making breakfast in my sisters kitchen. Tasty break too.

Thanks Rory storm i hope you made it out of the forest safely, some of them mushrooms can be strong

[Popey]

this song reminds me a bit of mobi's song go.
nice tune you created.

Thanks RNW, I am more than happy to hear this reminded you of Moby as I like his stuff.

This song (well the diva brass patch in the break) reminded me of yorkshire brass bands and old hovis ads hence the title (you probably need to be from the UK to know what they were like).

Appreciate the feedback

[rorystorm]

Nice!! Totally made me feel like I was dancing in a forest on mushrooms in 2001 instead of while I'm making breakfast in my sisters kitchen. Tasty break too.

Thanks Rory storm i hope you made it out of the forest safely, some of them mushrooms can be strong

Never left it mate

[summon.exe]

sounds good!

[Popey]

sounds good!

Thanks

[Mattvank]

1:30 and 2:01 are very cool. That 303 and distortion pad is placed well.
Will you make a rework for more details or build up or is the file closed?

[Arpeg]

Scenic montage. Very good track, well produced, excellent sound. I like in the drop down you slow the rate of certain sounds, nice touch. All sounds nicely spread out that rhythmically compliment one another, highly mixable track

[Popey]

1:30 and 2:01 are very cool. That 303 and distortion pad is placed well.
Will you make a rework for more details or build up or is the file closed?

Thanks for listening Mattvank. I may do a rework in the future but currently moved on to a new track.

As I improve I will probably revisit a lot of my stuff so possible in the future.

[Popey]

Scenic montage. Very good track, well produced, excellent sound. I like in the drop down you slow the rate of certain sounds, nice touch. All sounds nicely spread out that rhythmically compliment one another, highly mixable track

Thanks for listening and glad you enjoyed it. I was a dj for 20 years so always have an eye on mixability

[RTFX]

Love it!

[Popey]

Love it!

Thanks RTFX

[Chizmata]

Created for the challenge here: viewtopic.php?f=59&t=7529718

As always any comments appreciated

hi popey, i feel like this is the best track i've heard from you so far. in those before i've often had the feeling they were losing grip at some point in how the elements play together, but this is pretty tight-woven. i like how the many floating elements create a thick atmosphere above a powerful beat. there are little gripes though, i feel like the low end could use a tiny bit ( ~0,5) db more volume and all elements could be shifted left and right a bit with the groove mixer until they grip perfectly into each other.

[PhillipOrdonez]

Let's see what you got here, Popey.
Writing as i listen
The into is too short.
Nice transition between sections
The breakdown is here. Very well done.
Snare roll, not totally on board with the sound you used for it.

The drop, nice. Very nice.
Something sounds of ca 3 minutes in the way a section morphed.
Got Tracey now, you know how I feel about that
It is over now. The outro could be longer too. But overall great job!!!

[Popey]

Created for the challenge here: viewtopic.php?f=59&t=7529718

As always any comments appreciated

hi popey, i feel like this is the best track i've heard from you so far. in those before i've often had the feeling they were losing grip at some point in how the elements play together, but this is pretty tight-woven. i like how the many floating elements create a thick atmosphere above a powerful beat. there are little gripes though, i feel like the low end could use a tiny bit ( ~0,5) db more volume and all elements could be shifted left and right a bit with the groove mixer until they grip perfectly into each other.

Thanks for listening Chizmata and the feedback. Take on board your comments and a lot of the playing in this is me jamming on a push 2 so there are probably a few issues with timing. I fix obvious timing issues but others I leave if they give more groove or life to the song. Something I will be aware of moving forward and more focus on this may mean things fit better.

[Popey]

Let's see what you got here, Popey.
Writing as i listen
The into is too short.
Nice transition between sections
The breakdown is here. Very well done.
Snare roll, not totally on board with the sound you used for it.

The drop, nice. Very nice.
Something sounds of ca 3 minutes in the way a section morphed.
Got Tracey now, you know how I feel about that
It is over now. The outro could be longer too. But overall great job!!!

Thanks for the feedback Phillip. Will check out the section at 3mins and see what I have done wrong.
Working on another track at moment but plan to revisit most of my tracks and fix them (as I improve).

Appreciate your feedback as always

[PhillipOrdonez]

You've improved so much