electro pop

[reduk]

Hi reasoners,

i share with you this new track , made with reason and vst, advise are welcome .
Cheers
reduk

[Uman's]

Hi,

I will not leave a topic uncommented on this forum.
Work like this deserves to be encouraged.
So i keep it up.

Your track is interesting, it presents all the structure necessary for such a production.
A melody, a leading instrument, a layer in the background.

On the mastering side, the bass lacks depth and the lead is too forward.
Easy for you to correct.

The melody is well followed but your last part is useless. It forgets the main theme unnecessarily which
was well exploited and sufficient until then to make an end. Stop it at 3"46.

GOOD ! Play once again for us !