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The instrumentation, vocals and mix sound great. The only recommendation I'd have is focusing on having the chorus pop more. There aren't any dynamics between the verse and chorus. I feel like that could really raise the chorus up nicely. Other than that, I really liked this. Nice work!
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Thanks for the reply and positive remarks! Yes, you're right about the choruses - I probably should have stripped the verses down a bit more and then bolstered the choruses within the arrangements - perhaps with some harmonies, as the backing vocals are all either just doubles or octaves; and I probably laid the BVs on too heavily in the verses too. One of the things I need to work on more is managing the hype levels through a track so it goes up and down a bit better like a rollercoasterstrangers wrote: ↑23 May 2022The instrumentation, vocals and mix sound great. The only recommendation I'd have is focusing on having the chorus pop more. There aren't any dynamics between the verse and chorus. I feel like that could really raise the chorus up nicely. Other than that, I really liked this. Nice work!
Thanks so much for listening and taking the time to feedback.
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