Greetings, my friends!
I am working on this one, but wanted to ask for some opinions:
Do you think the lead is too loud , etc?
As for the percussions (Closed HH, Shaker...), I have not found proper ones yet.
I am also not sure if the song is too short.
Let me know what ya think?
Thanks!
Chris
(EDM/Trance) Gnuc - Dreamer
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"And I still don't know if I'm a falcon, a storm, or an unfinished song."
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Very nice tune. The melody played by the lead is memorable. The rythmic section sounds good too. I feel a bit diappointed by the snare sound, it is a little too dry for my taste, it could use more slap. Such a cool melody has a lot of potential, but for now there's only one theme and only one harmonic progression. I'll wait for a more advanced version. Good job so far!
Thanks for your kind words!Quarmat wrote: ↑21 Jan 2022Very nice tune. The melody played by the lead is memorable. The rythmic section sounds good too. I feel a bit diappointed by the snare sound, it is a little too dry for my taste, it could use more slap. Such a cool melody has a lot of potential, but for now there's only one theme and only one harmonic progression. I'll wait for a more advanced version. Good job so far!
I already changed one chord. Sound more interesting now.
Finding proper percussions, and where to put them, is more difficult to me.
"And I still don't know if I'm a falcon, a storm, or an unfinished song."
https://soundcloud.com/gnucmusic
https://soundcloud.com/gnucmusic
Here is the second half of the song:
New melody, one chord has changed.
As first melody represents someone who wants to but does not dare, the second melody is about that person letting go of doubts, fear, etc.
It is a rough version. I am not sure of the lead sound or if I should use the one in the Demo?
Let me know what ya think?
Thanks!
Chris
New melody, one chord has changed.
As first melody represents someone who wants to but does not dare, the second melody is about that person letting go of doubts, fear, etc.
It is a rough version. I am not sure of the lead sound or if I should use the one in the Demo?
Let me know what ya think?
Thanks!
Chris
"And I still don't know if I'm a falcon, a storm, or an unfinished song."
https://soundcloud.com/gnucmusic
https://soundcloud.com/gnucmusic
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