New track cross between yello and kraftwerk

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gritz
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Post 09 Jan 2022

Hi guys would love some feedback on this track
Appreciate any useful critique



Hoboys
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Post 15 Jan 2022

It's a dance track basically, but there's nothing to dance to. make it 4 on the floor. Like when the kick only hits twice @ 0:19. Just let it keep hitting all the time. This will be the core of the track, then you can build up the movement and progression of the bass.

PhillipOrdonez
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Post 15 Jan 2022

I am also missing the kick pulsing on this track, gritz. Once that's established, the breaks without it will stand out and there will be flow.
The latest release:

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gritz
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Post 16 Jan 2022

Yeah wasn’t sure what this was becoming - tried not to go down the 4 on the floor beat -

PhillipOrdonez
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Post 16 Jan 2022

You can try a broken beat!
The latest release:

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raymondh
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Post 17 Jan 2022

You nailed the yello + kraftwerk vibes! I agree with the other folks about a 4 on floor kick. Nice one!

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gritz
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Post 16 Jun 2022

Have taken your advice and changed it up a bit



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