[sick twisted industrial techno] Rising Night Wave - Disgusting Life (WIP)

[Rising Night Wave]

another sick one from me. sick twisted industrial techno.

[Jackjackdaw]

Nice one

[Rising Night Wave]

Nice one

thank you

[reark]

I like the rhythm/groove on this one, and there's some nice variation around 3:00-3:15 where you drum program a little with the non-bass elements and make that mutilated snare/clap sound brighter. I wanted to hear more of that personally. I think the murky/slimey undercurrent that permeates the whole track would be even more effective if, now and again, you let the listener briefly 'gasp for air' before you plunge them back in it. So perhaps find some moments at the end of eight bars or in bridge sections where you clear out the bass just for a little (e.g. like a DJ might with a filter). Currently, nearly all the ominous agression is coming from the lower registers. Perhaps attack the listener in the highs as well? Just some thoughts... I liked it.

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