[goa/psy tech trance] Rising Night Wave - Disdained Kingdome (WIP)

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Rising Night Wave
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Post 20 Sep 2021

hi you all!

my new song:



i couldn't resist to show you my new wip song.
tell me what do you think.
Last edited by Rising Night Wave on 02 Oct 2021, edited 1 time in total.
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Post 20 Sep 2021

Sounds ok so far sounddesign-/EQ-ingwise.

I feel there are some imbalances regarding the volumerelations between sounds though, for example at first the bassdrum + claps/snare are a little too loud while during the softer part I find they are too soft. When the stronger bassdrum is kicking in again along with its high volume it makes it sound like a new, louder song is being mixed into it. Also the bassline could be a little more prominent and less hidden at least in the stronger part, possibly not too much for the style you seem to be going for, though that would need some experimentation to find out what suits best.

The dynamic of the song is still a little flat because new parts often simply turn on while the rest of the song mostly doesn´t seem to notice the incoming melody for example. The little breaks and build-ups here and there help a little yet not enough while the tempoautomation still feels a little forced and funny timingwise I find. I recommend creating some more build-ups and also breakdowns preparing the listener for something new to happen, then, well, it´s a WIP after all :-).

I find the voicelines like the "go" a little too repetitively used. At least maybe not all 4 bars but 8? Also it seems the whole song is based on 4 bar or sometimes even just 2 bar patterns. I would up bascially every repeating part to 8 bars except for where repetitivness is possibly wanted because 8 bars is just the length where a pattern starts to not sound repetitive anymore.

In addition I suggest a little more variation within the single voices. Like especially the synths are playing steadily the same melody with the same timbre. I recommend at least some sort of automation, like classically the filter frequency or any parameter that brings in some sonic variation, not necessarily changing the melody itself.

I would really like to hear a version where the leveling is more balanced and the parts are a little more sophisticated. Good work so far though. Keep it up :-)

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Post 21 Sep 2021

Cool song rising night wave. Agree with the comment above about the volume imbalance in places but as this is only a work in progress I am looking forward to the final version once you have sorted these odd things out. Good work

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Post 28 Sep 2021

DEMO SONG SUBMITION


hi you all. i need some help from you folks.

1st: sorry you two guys moofi and Popey. shortly, i was in deep sh** lately. no energy for nothing. eh, sucks. i aoplogize to you two guys. expect answer soon.

now: here is the thing i want to be cleared:
question is: is this thing legit and okey to subimt this disdained kingdome song. or is it fake. maybe if they are gonna steal my song. i do not know. this is first of a kind of message i got from someone. i got a message on soundcloud... saying this (c/p):

"A&R
We want sign an agreement!??..Hello Rising Night Wave, this work‘Disdained Kingdome (WIP)’…Beautiful!..Please submit this unsigned tracks into my staff,they speak to you about following steps…"


i got ths message from this guy: https://soundcloud.com/quryrlayel
if i look at thins guy's profile.... there is a link: https://gate.sc/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdemo ... 2862087225 following to this ste: https://demos-drop.xyz/

now. what can i expect? does anyone know anything from them?
aparently it is about MOJOHEADZ record label. or what? is it fake? or true?

mostly it concerns me the fact that my song is not finished. it is WIP. i do not know what they are up to.
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Post 28 Sep 2021

Rising Night Wave wrote:
28 Sep 2021
DEMO SONG SUBMITION


hi you all. i need some help from you folks.

1st: sorry you two guys moofi and Popey. shortly, i was in deep sh** lately. no energy for nothing. eh, sucks. i aoplogize to you two guys. expect answer soon.

now: here is the thing i want to be cleared:
question is: is this thing legit and okey to subimt this disdained kingdome song. or is it fake. maybe if they are gonna steal my song. i do not know. this is first of a kind of message i got from someone. i got a message on soundcloud... saying this (c/p):

"A&R
We want sign an agreement!??..Hello Rising Night Wave, this work‘Disdained Kingdome (WIP)’…Beautiful!..Please submit this unsigned tracks into my staff,they speak to you about following steps…"


i got ths message from this guy: https://soundcloud.com/quryrlayel
if i look at thins guy's profile.... there is a link: https://gate.sc/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdemo ... 2862087225 following to this ste: https://demos-drop.xyz/

now. what can i expect? does anyone know anything from them?
aparently it is about MOJOHEADZ record label. or what? is it fake? or true?

mostly it concerns me the fact that my song is not finished. it is WIP. i do not know what they are up to.
I have no idea but I guess a good rule of thumb is if they ask for any money step away.

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Post 28 Sep 2021

Popey wrote:
28 Sep 2021
Rising Night Wave wrote:
28 Sep 2021
DEMO SONG SUBMITION


hi you all. i need some help from you folks.

1st: sorry you two guys moofi and Popey. shortly, i was in deep sh** lately. no energy for nothing. eh, sucks. i aoplogize to you two guys. expect answer soon.

now: here is the thing i want to be cleared:
question is: is this thing legit and okey to subimt this disdained kingdome song. or is it fake. maybe if they are gonna steal my song. i do not know. this is first of a kind of message i got from someone. i got a message on soundcloud... saying this (c/p):

"A&R
We want sign an agreement!??..Hello Rising Night Wave, this work‘Disdained Kingdome (WIP)’…Beautiful!..Please submit this unsigned tracks into my staff,they speak to you about following steps…"


i got ths message from this guy: https://soundcloud.com/quryrlayel
if i look at thins guy's profile.... there is a link: https://gate.sc/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdemo ... 2862087225 following to this ste: https://demos-drop.xyz/

now. what can i expect? does anyone know anything from them?
aparently it is about MOJOHEADZ record label. or what? is it fake? or true?

mostly it concerns me the fact that my song is not finished. it is WIP. i do not know what they are up to.
I have no idea but I guess a good rule of thumb is if they ask for any money step away.
yes. i am aware of that.
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Post 28 Sep 2021

Rising Night Wave wrote:
28 Sep 2021
DEMO SONG SUBMITION


hi you all. i need some help from you folks.

1st: sorry you two guys moofi and Popey. shortly, i was in deep sh** lately. no energy for nothing. eh, sucks. i aoplogize to you two guys. expect answer soon.

now: here is the thing i want to be cleared:
question is: is this thing legit and okey to subimt this disdained kingdome song. or is it fake. maybe if they are gonna steal my song. i do not know. this is first of a kind of message i got from someone. i got a message on soundcloud... saying this (c/p):

"A&R
We want sign an agreement!??..Hello Rising Night Wave, this work‘Disdained Kingdome (WIP)’…Beautiful!..Please submit this unsigned tracks into my staff,they speak to you about following steps…"


i got ths message from this guy: https://soundcloud.com/quryrlayel
if i look at thins guy's profile.... there is a link: https://gate.sc/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdemo ... 2862087225 following to this ste: https://demos-drop.xyz/

now. what can i expect? does anyone know anything from them?
aparently it is about MOJOHEADZ record label. or what? is it fake? or true?

mostly it concerns me the fact that my song is not finished. it is WIP. i do not know what they are up to.
Most likely an ulterior motive.. but you can always setup a new alternate email and send them something you don't care about. See where it leads. I mean.. if you are truly curious.

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Post 28 Sep 2021

hu. now this looks good and maybe realy promising.
i remembered to look at discogs.com site.
so here are some entries (releases): https://www.discogs.com/label/1634998-Mojoheadz-Records
and in their description there is link to beatport's site for this record label.
here is the interesting thing - thih MojoHeadz Record Label looks realytively huge.
here is the MHR's site on beatport: https://www.beatport.com/label/mojohead ... 099/tracks (their tracks on BP - around 1,3k songs)

hm. interesting.

what do you think? it looks cool.
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Post 29 Sep 2021

Rising Night Wave wrote:
28 Sep 2021
hu. now this looks good and maybe realy promising.
i remembered to look at discogs.com site.
so here are some entries (releases): https://www.discogs.com/label/1634998-Mojoheadz-Records
and in their description there is link to beatport's site for this record label.
here is the interesting thing - thih MojoHeadz Record Label looks realytively huge.
here is the MHR's site on beatport: https://www.beatport.com/label/mojohead ... 099/tracks (their tracks on BP - around 1,3k songs)

hm. interesting.

what do you think? it looks cool.
Did a quick Google search and could not find anything implying it is a scam. Saw a reddit post that seems to imply they are someway linked to Warner music. Think it may be worth you finding out more from them about the contract at the very least to see what cut they take, how they will promote your music etc. Good on ya if you take a deal as I have liked your tunes for a while.

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Post 29 Sep 2021

There's a lot of energy in that song that I wasn't ready for but glad I listened. Good luck with the potential endeavor and keep us updated!

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Post 01 Oct 2021

Thank you guys Popey and strangers. I appreciate that. Thank you and to others really a lot.

Well, I just - a few moments ago - submitted this song through their demo submittion web page.
I will report what they will say.
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Post 02 Oct 2021

0Key. here is the thing (c/p of their e-mail i got today):



"
Hey,

We like your demo and would love to work on it.

Could you please answer these questions?

- Is the track 100% original?
- How old are You?
- Where are you from?

If you did use any samples, the samples must be Royalty Free and you need to be able to send us the receipt for buying these samples! We not accepting bootlegs, mash-ups and not official remixes.

You can submit only your unsigned production.

--
Best regards,
Team MojoHeadz Records

MOJOHEADZ RECORDS

https://mojoheadz.com/
https://mojoheadzrecords.com/

Follow MojoHeadz Records:

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/mojoheadzrec
Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/mojoheadz
FaceBook: https://www.facebook.com/mojoheadz
Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/mojoheadzrecords




Yuhey! Hehe. I am all excited.
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Post 08 Oct 2021

okey. i sent them all answers. all proofs. and so.
so i got their answer saying they will discus my song on their meeting this week.
and that they will contact me back asap.

cool. i am all excited. i hope i will get a positive answer.
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Post 13 Oct 2021

they also got interested into this song: Rising Night Wave - Disgusting Life (WIP)

i am a bit surprised over them - such a big record label got interested into such an obscure and underground song. hehe. cool. i hope i will got a deal for this song too.

--- --- --- --- --- ---

about this Disdained Kingdome song - i need to pay for mastering - the price is very cool: $59, very acceptable and cool price; then we go for work with this song, they said. very cool. am all excited. :D
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Post 27 Oct 2021

i just sent a signed agreement. yuhey!
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Post 27 Oct 2021

Rising Night Wave wrote:
27 Oct 2021
i just sent a signed agreement. yuhey!
Cool. You should post a link once mastered and released.

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Post 27 Oct 2021

yes :puf_smile:
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Post 27 Oct 2021

got mail from them: release plan in 6-8 weeks
cool. am all happy. :D :D :D
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Post 27 Oct 2021

interesting track, be careful with the labels and the people on Soundcloud. Most would take your track and you would not get any information about how much they sold or how much money you got. It is always better to get experience from other members of the same label (if the label is not famous).

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Post 11 Jan 2022

okey folks. here is the good news i have got for you:

this song Disdained Kingdome will be released on 6th of May.

yuhey! yuhey! hehe
i am all excited already.

today i got an e-mail from MojoHeadz Records label telling me that.
and also they will need from me some bio and my best photo and a short 1 min video.
okey. everytrhing is fine only about video i have no clue and idea what to tell, how to act and so. :shame: my my. hehe.

i will do my best anyway. i will use a professional photo studio for this. only for self photo the colour and other photomanipulation things i will do that. i am a bit skilled with PhotoShop. i am doing covers for my music with PS. so i will do that. i will provide them a clean photo and my version.

so... when there will be more info i will tell you.

:thumbup:
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Post 12 Jan 2022

Maybe its a variation of this scheme?
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