I think my tracks are slowly getting better -what dou you think?
Feedback is very welcome !
(melodic techno) Precursor to the Immersive
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i do not know your previous songs but this song has okey start and great start evolving. it is nice track you have done. i like it. calm techno. very well done.
i am listening now this song on my studio reference headphones and i must say it sounds pretty okey.
only at 2:34 song losses tension of hardness from befre of that point. it became a bit too mellow if i may say so. but this is your song and you wanted to say something with it. so... i shall stick to the technical side of song. it's okay. everything works more or less fine. it is well balanced song. levels are okay. synth sounds work together well.
i do not know what else to say. atm i am a bit tired. sorry for that. perhaps i should do a review next time or at least tomorrow but i think i said enough.
nice song overall. i like it.
thumbs up.
ps: end is also great. hehe. i do not know. i hope you won't be upset or disappointedor affected: the middle part from 2:34 on and till around 4:50 song is like that that i do not like that part. - i do not like that middle part. but this is just my oppinion. as i said this is your story and i think i must stick to the technical part not social part (meaning, expression, message) of song. ... okey, enough of that. song is cool, you know.
i am listening now this song on my studio reference headphones and i must say it sounds pretty okey.
only at 2:34 song losses tension of hardness from befre of that point. it became a bit too mellow if i may say so. but this is your song and you wanted to say something with it. so... i shall stick to the technical side of song. it's okay. everything works more or less fine. it is well balanced song. levels are okay. synth sounds work together well.
i do not know what else to say. atm i am a bit tired. sorry for that. perhaps i should do a review next time or at least tomorrow but i think i said enough.
nice song overall. i like it.
thumbs up.
ps: end is also great. hehe. i do not know. i hope you won't be upset or disappointedor affected: the middle part from 2:34 on and till around 4:50 song is like that that i do not like that part. - i do not like that middle part. but this is just my oppinion. as i said this is your story and i think i must stick to the technical part not social part (meaning, expression, message) of song. ... okey, enough of that. song is cool, you know.
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Sounds good. I would do something to the parts like at 3:30 where the bass plays mostly alone with the drums? I would do something to that bass so it doesn't sound so trancey. I would first filter it down, is that doesn't work, I would think about changing the synth or the pattern. But that's me. The song works well for the genre, if not a bit cliché-y.
I also didn't like the organ like pluck at around 4 minutes in. This music should be darker, that particular sound makes it sound cheesy, like the trance bass, in my humble, elitist opinion
I also didn't like the organ like pluck at around 4 minutes in. This music should be darker, that particular sound makes it sound cheesy, like the trance bass, in my humble, elitist opinion
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Whenever you lose objectivity by working long on a project, the best is to forget about it for a week or two and work on other tracks. Always have a bunch of projects at different levels so you can hop between them, that way it always stays fresh. Do this enough and at some point you'll be able to finish a song very quickly on one or two sessions and that way the objectivity problem is no longer an issue.
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