(Pop) The World Outside

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man made material
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Post 02 Jun 2021

So I think this is the pop-iest thing Iโ€™ve done, maybe my best vocal, although maybe thatโ€™s not saying much!๐Ÿ˜‚... everything done in Reason 11...

https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/71ZmRgr9BHFjngmL7

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Post 03 Jun 2021

Cool song. I rarely take notice of lyrics in music. But I read the lyrics while listening to the song. Good topic that's worth thinking about. :thumbs_up:

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integerpoet
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Post 03 Jun 2021

Please keep at the pop. You're good at it.

I noticed the next track on SoundCloud is a Depeche Mode cover. And it's starting off well.

I think we'll get along just fine. :-)

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Post 05 Jun 2021

TritoneAddiction wrote: โ†‘
03 Jun 2021
Cool song. I rarely take notice of lyrics in music. But I read the lyrics while listening to the song. Good topic that's worth thinking about. :thumbs_up:
Thanks so much for giving it a listen. I appreciate the positive feedback and thanks for taking the time to read the lyrics!๐Ÿ‘

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Post 05 Jun 2021

integerpoet wrote: โ†‘
03 Jun 2021
Please keep at the pop. You're good at it.

I noticed the next track on SoundCloud is a Depeche Mode cover. And it's starting off well.

I think we'll get along just fine. :-)
Thanks for listening and the encouragement! Iโ€™ll keep slogging at it!
I noticed you had a dig through a few of my tracks, thanks so much for taking the time!๐Ÿ™

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integerpoet
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Post 05 Jun 2021

man made material wrote: โ†‘
05 Jun 2021
I noticed you had a dig through a few of my tracks, thanks so much for taking the time!๐Ÿ™
Thanks for making tracks worth digging through!

I don't visit SoundCloud by habit (yet) but I predict you will have been a good follow when I do visit it.

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Post 07 Jun 2021

Cool track I like the little touch's when about cookies, random generators in the song it was very clever. Enjoyed listening to this and following on with the lyrics (but not singing as i would clear the room with my voice).

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Post 09 Jun 2021

Popey wrote: โ†‘
07 Jun 2021
Cool track I like the little touch's when about cookies, random generators in the song it was very clever. Enjoyed listening to this and following on with the lyrics (but not singing as i would clear the room with my voice).
Cheers Popey! Go on sing along and clear the room eff em!๐Ÿ˜‚

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raymondh
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Post 10 Jun 2021

Very cool. Great lyrics!
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Post 11 Jun 2021

A proper song! Vocal needs more tonal variation, like what you did on the "don't LOSE..." phrase, because currently you're hitting the same notes in every line. Don't worry, this just comes with a bit more practice. You will almost definitely revisit this song at some point in the future if you continue with the singing because it's solid. Big thumbs up from me!
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