Drum and Bass / Bass Music Skimrok

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Skimrok
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04 Feb 2021

latest one from me while trying to sort out my past tunes to keep me occupied

12 with 11 Suite :reason:/ Akai Mini Mk3 / MPD218 /Eve SC207 Monitors / Mrs10 Sub / Motu M2 / Zen Can

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05 Feb 2021

Cool track Skimrok, really like the vocal sample and this track flows real nice 👍

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Rising Night Wave
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05 Feb 2021

aha. it's nice. nice arrangement.
nice bass line. female vocal is good, too.
only a bit too minimaml for dnb style. - for my taste.
song is just the right length.
othewise drums are cool. very interesting and dynamic, versatile.
nicely done.

otherwise production is okey. i have no complains. very good done.
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Billy+
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05 Feb 2021

Really cool track.

how are you producing that scratch? Sample or device?

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MannequinRaces
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05 Feb 2021

Nice track! My only suggestion is I would of liked to have heard more variation in the ‘snare’ sound. Gets a little too repetitive. Like raise or lower it in pitch in spots, that sort of thing.

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TheDragonborg
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05 Feb 2021

MannequinRaces wrote:
05 Feb 2021
Nice track! My only suggestion is I would of liked to have heard more variation in the ‘snare’ sound. Gets a little too repetitive. Like raise or lower it in pitch in spots, that sort of thing.
I think it sounds too pitched up... I don't really understand the trend lately in DnB with the really pitched up snare...

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MannequinRaces
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05 Feb 2021

TheDragonborg wrote:
05 Feb 2021
MannequinRaces wrote:
05 Feb 2021
Nice track! My only suggestion is I would of liked to have heard more variation in the ‘snare’ sound. Gets a little too repetitive. Like raise or lower it in pitch in spots, that sort of thing.
I think it sounds too pitched up... I don't really understand the trend lately in DnB with the really pitched up snare...
I’m not familiar with the genre at all but from a casual listeners perspective some variation wouldn’t hurt.

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TheDragonborg
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06 Feb 2021

MannequinRaces wrote:
05 Feb 2021
TheDragonborg wrote:
05 Feb 2021


I think it sounds too pitched up... I don't really understand the trend lately in DnB with the really pitched up snare...
I’m not familiar with the genre at all but from a casual listeners perspective some variation wouldn’t hurt.
I'm very familiar with it. It does not need much variations in the pitch of the snare. Maybe a pitched down snare every now and then. Other than the snare I'm really liking the drums. Especially those fills.

Skrimlok, I really really like your selection of sounds but I still think your compositions themselves need a bit of cohesion.

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drk73
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06 Feb 2021

Nice VOCALS! 👍

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Skimrok
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06 Feb 2021

thanks gang I will re do this because the suggestions are now standing out to me now , yeah I can hear what you saying :thumbs_up: hopefully as time gets on I can iron out these miss opportunity's on becoming better :thumbup:

made the track private so I can get to work on it next week
12 with 11 Suite :reason:/ Akai Mini Mk3 / MPD218 /Eve SC207 Monitors / Mrs10 Sub / Motu M2 / Zen Can

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Skimrok
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09 Feb 2021

This is my latest attempt :puf_smile:

12 with 11 Suite :reason:/ Akai Mini Mk3 / MPD218 /Eve SC207 Monitors / Mrs10 Sub / Motu M2 / Zen Can

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Skimrok
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12 Feb 2021

My last attempt on this one

12 with 11 Suite :reason:/ Akai Mini Mk3 / MPD218 /Eve SC207 Monitors / Mrs10 Sub / Motu M2 / Zen Can

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