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gritz
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16 Jan 2021



Mate said it had slight Japan feeling to it

But not sure it’s one of those tracks which you start and it just falls into place with no real plan

Feedback please

Love to have vocals on it

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Jagwah
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17 Jan 2021

gritz wrote:
16 Jan 2021


Mate said it had slight Japan feeling to it

But not sure it’s one of those tracks which you start and it just falls into place with no real plan

Feedback please

Love to have vocals on it
Really nice man has a strong vibe to it, I felt the breakdown before the guitar re-appeared was a bit long, I was wanting to hear it again sooner but that's just me, really chill and enjoyable.

rabidonthetrack
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25 Jan 2021

You have a nice vibe going and it was a pleasant listening experience.

The main melodic instrument has a slight twang to it which might sound Japanese but the notation doesn't make me think of Japan.

Hint: Japanese = no minor notes.

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gritz
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25 Jan 2021

actually when I said Japan it was in as the BAND JAPAN as in 1980's band with david sylvian

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raymondh
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28 Jan 2021

gritz wrote:
16 Jan 2021


Mate said it had slight Japan feeling to it

But not sure it’s one of those tracks which you start and it just falls into place with no real plan

Feedback please

Love to have vocals on it
Nice track. I like the melodies!

FrankJaeger
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30 Jan 2021

This is awesome. This sounds like something that would be in a Quentin Tarantino movie to be honest. Like a grand ballroom dancing scene just before the violence erupts like his movies tend to do. Lol...

Good vibe though.
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gritz
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01 Feb 2021

Thanks for a lovely feedback guys need to think of how to move into the next section!
And need to quantise the lead plucky sound it’s annoyingly slightly off sync

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