(Synthwave) Retrofuturismo
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- TritoneAddiction
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Sounds really good. The sounds and production is spot on for this kind of track.
My only criticism is that I wan't either a vocalist or a clear instrumental melody to come in and grab me at some point. Right now it chugs along, but I can't help but feel like the song never really takes off.
That sax melody and choiry part are both nice but I need a really strong melody to come in. A melody that tells me, this is the song, you'll remember me.
I don't know if that made sense, but that's how I felt listening anyway. Take what you want from it.
My only criticism is that I wan't either a vocalist or a clear instrumental melody to come in and grab me at some point. Right now it chugs along, but I can't help but feel like the song never really takes off.
That sax melody and choiry part are both nice but I need a really strong melody to come in. A melody that tells me, this is the song, you'll remember me.
I don't know if that made sense, but that's how I felt listening anyway. Take what you want from it.
thanks for comment, I'm glad it sounds good because I mixed it with headphones and I wasn't sure if it sounded righTritoneAddiction wrote: ↑20 Dec 2020Sounds really good. The sounds and production is spot on for this kind of track.
My only criticism is that I wan't either a vocalist or a clear instrumental melody to come in and grab me at some point. Right now it chugs
the other thing you are right, some parts are empty
the thing is, i always leaves room for the voice, in my head sounds with the voice-
I will take it in consideration, thank you
yea nice music, but yes it feels as though it is a song out if which someone took out the vocals
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