22 Jul 2020
It's nice work – thanks for sharing. After the first minute I expected the track to continue without beats, so the switch was surprising, but it's handled well. A further surprise was the fact that the occasional portamento in the first minute doesn't return later. The watery drop-out at around 2:21 is nice. I don't know whether the chord changes are complex ones, but they feel like it, and as though one would need to hear the track a few times to get a handle on them all.
The only element that seems a little unconvincing to me is the trumpet, or trumpet pad. I realize that there are other "organic" sounds in the mix here, such as the vocals and piano (or piano pad?), but the trumpet seems maybe a little too lounge. But again, maybe it's just a matter of hearing the track repeatedly.
For what it's worth, I listened to this without the visuals. I'm sure they're fine, but I just wanted to hear the track on its own.