[HOUSE[ FANTASTIC FANATICS (Gmin - 126bpm)

[danc]

Work in progress on Fantastic Fanatics... I've got some ideas on taking this one to the next level.... but wanted to know your thoughts so far. My ideas are to turn it into a vocal led track... so that what you hear become the foundations. Plus... I have some ideas for a lead melody to add on top, thus building it up into an even bolder production.

Anyway... as long as you see it as work in progress and imagine where it can lead.

Lastly - so you understand my mindset... I am keen to explore creating big sounding sound stages - thus this has more elements my normal productions. And I'm judiciously carving each layer with its own EQ window - minimising overlap.

[Rising Night Wave]

intro is a bit too long
bass synth is awesome
lady vocal is... i don't know... it somehow doesn't fit into this song
the main synth could be a bit more harsh, more sharp
the whole song lacks more dynamics, more dinamical structure
but in a whole it is very interesting song

i like a lot the rrrraaaa vocal hehe

that would be all from me
take care and cheers

[danc]

intro is a bit too long
bass synth is awesome
lady vocal is... i don't know... it somehow doesn't fit into this song
the main synth could be a bit more harsh, more sharp
the whole song lacks more dynamics, more dinamical structure
but in a whole it is very interesting song

i like a lot the rrrraaaa vocal hehe

that would be all from me
take care and cheers

Agree - intro too long - once i've created the lead vocal/tune I will re-arrange things around.

Agree - the main synth needs a sharper edge - which it does have... so i'll sharpen it up.

I think the talking can work... it just needs more careful work.

Thanks for comments. And agree - rrrrraaaa vocal is cool.