[DEEP HOUSE] GAME OVER (A# - 124bpm)
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Fresh ears and got various elements more balanced... hear it through and you'll see how I'm ebbing and flowing elements to give interest and a tribal chanting feel.
Kind of cinematic sounding to me.
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As for the male voice coming in and stoping the lady going on and on.. .totally agree. Will take her out of the middle section and find a counter male voice to get some perspective.
Thanks for ideas and thoughts.
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Spent a few hours cleaning up the track.
Reduced the cassette sound on the woman's voice - it's still there - but less so.
Gave more breathing space in the middle - cutting out that woman talking on and on. I cut her short - which I think works better - giving space for the music to come in and take over. Thanks for your tip on telling me to cut her down.
I also cut out the monkey squeak a lot earlier and bring it back in very quietly - which again I think helps the build up.
I did try some alternative male voices to take over but couldn't find anything that sounded right - just sounded lame.
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Sounds much cleaner.
Also, an idea:
you should make a "declamation sample" the centerpiece of another track, to get it out of your system if for no other reason.
something like this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3_5oRtBDtfg
There's plenty of these samples around, a lot of them free, like the Martin Luther King lectures
P.S.: That is not to say you should stop working on this one!
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