(Future instrumental / electronic) Nim - Caret

[Nim]

Trying to record my own samples, had fun with water and other random objects.

[Chizmata]

Great mix, a lot of creativity and cool atmosphere. on the downside i feel like the different parts lack a bit of musical coherence, like they are from different pieces.

[TritoneAddiction]

Wow that's pretty damn cool. Lots of interesting things happening troughout the track. Great mix too.

[Nim]

Great mix, a lot of creativity and cool atmosphere. on the downside i feel like the different parts lack a bit of musical coherence, like they are from different pieces.

Thank you! I personally like a bit of incoherence and left turns, and that you need to listen to the track a few times for it to "make sense". This is however really hard to judge with your own stuff as you can't unhear it. The jazzy part in the middle especially was an experiment, and i probably could have ditched the room design. Do you feel like the verse to chorus transition works though?

Wow that's pretty damn cool. Lots of interesting things happening troughout the track. Great mix too.

Thank you!

[Chizmata]

Great mix, a lot of creativity and cool atmosphere. on the downside i feel like the different parts lack a bit of musical coherence, like they are from different pieces.

Thank you! I personally like a bit of incoherence and left turns, and that you need to listen to the track a few times for it to "make sense". This is however really hard to judge with your own stuff as you can't unhear it. The jazzy part in the middle especially was an experiment, and i probably could have ditched the room design. Do you feel like the verse to chorus transition works though?

yes the transitions are surely there, maybe thats what even points me to the incoherence . but also, this topic is a pet peeve of me. if thats your style i cant argue with that.