(electronic) Sequestrator

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visheshl
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12 Nov 2019

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Let's go (outer space)

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Sequestrator is now Let's go(outer space)
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Previous tracks

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DreamTSB

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Atlantis

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Onset

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Please do listen
Last edited by visheshl on 14 Nov 2019, edited 2 times in total.

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12 Nov 2019

Good tracks! 👍


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Benedict
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13 Nov 2019

Nice sound and pleasing enough overall to hear.

Reminds me of some of a French House guy from the late-'90s I once had on cassette.

My concerns are that while it is nice, there is never really a melody to lift it from being loops. Nice loops but not more than patterns going around. A little melody will help you "lift-off" more. Atlantis seems to solve that :-)

Also in the first three tracks at least, the Kik is always a bit too loud. I know you want it very dominant but you can pull it back a bit and it will still do that job, whilst also allowing more space for what you can make unique about your pieces which are your melodies & instrumentation.

:-)
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visheshl
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13 Nov 2019

Thank you Benedict, for actually taking the time to listen to my music and also for giving me constructive feedback.
I will incorporate more melodies in my next tracks and also pull the kick down.
I appreciate your suggestions, unless someone listens to your music and tells you what they feel about it, one can't move forward.
I will definitely keep your feedback in mind for the next tracks and also in case i redo these existing tracks, i will lower the kick and add some melodies.
Thanks and regards
Vishesche

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14 Nov 2019

visheshl wrote:
13 Nov 2019
Thank you Benedict, for actually taking the time to listen to my music and also for giving me constructive feedback.
I will incorporate more melodies in my next tracks and also pull the kick down.
I appreciate your suggestions, unless someone listens to your music and tells you what they feel about it, one can't move forward.
I will definitely keep your feedback in mind for the next tracks and also in case i redo these existing tracks, i will lower the kick and add some melodies.
Thanks and regards
Vishesche
No worries. we are supposed to be here to help each other.
:-)
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visheshl
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14 Nov 2019

Hey i edited my track sequestrator and made Let's go (outer space).
As per your suggestions, i put more Melodies in the track, lowered the drums a Little, and also incorporated some vocals. Do listen to this one again

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19 Nov 2019

visheshl wrote:
14 Nov 2019
Hey i edited my track sequestrator and made Let's go (outer space).
As per your suggestions, i put more Melodies in the track, lowered the drums a Little, and also incorporated some vocals. Do listen to this one again
It feels much better balanced now.

Of course, I really love Vocoder but I feel like it isn't really tied to the track. Like it is an afterthought and not the story of the track. Maybe I just hear it and hope for a more Hi-NRG thing...

The Mix feels much more natural now so that is a big win.

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