(electro dub?) Layer By Layer

[jam-s]

I'd be interested in your feedback on my recent track:

https://demozoo.org/music/266469/
https://files.scene.org/view/parties/20 ... b_mix_.ogg

As i mixed it just on headphones I only realised that the mix got quite a bit too bass heavy when played back on a big PA system. Also I have smashed the limiter too hard (but at least I won the loudness war at the party... not too proud about this... )
Apart from these issues, do you think the track has potential if I give the mixing and mastering another make-over?

[TritoneAddiction]

I'd be interested in your feedback on my recent track:

https://demozoo.org/music/266469/
https://files.scene.org/view/parties/20 ... b_mix_.ogg

As i mixed it just on headphones I only realised that the mix got quite a bit too bass heavy when played back on a big PA system. Also I have smashed the limiter too hard (but at least I won the loudness war at the party... not too proud about this... )
Apart from these issues, do you think the track has potential if I give the mixing and mastering another make-over?

I like it. I can see myself listening to this several times.
Mix sounds good to me.
Nice work.

[jam-s]

I'd be interested in your feedback on my recent track:

https://demozoo.org/music/266469/
https://files.scene.org/view/parties/20 ... b_mix_.ogg

As i mixed it just on headphones I only realised that the mix got quite a bit too bass heavy when played back on a big PA system. Also I have smashed the limiter too hard (but at least I won the loudness war at the party... not too proud about this... )
Apart from these issues, do you think the track has potential if I give the mixing and mastering another make-over?

I like it. I can see myself listening to this several times.
Mix sounds good to me.
Nice work.

Thanks for the nice words. Regarding the mix: On Headphones I think it sounds fine, but when played on a potent PA system the bass starts to swamp the finer details too much imho. But until I finally get to set up my basement studio I won't be able to get it fixed, I guess.

[bitley]

Can't play it. I suggest Soundcloud or Choon for posting tracks.

[jam-s]

That's strange. Is there still a browser/OS that cannot play .ogg vorbis files natively?