(Industrial Tech/Dark Wave) Man Becomes Machine

[Nerveclinic]

Hi Everyone, thanks for dropping in.

Most of my tracks are instrumental only. This is the first vocal track in a long time. Recorded in a non sound proofed bedroom studio.

I would appreciate any comments, feedback or suggestions if you have a strong opinion on the vocals and what might be done technically to improve the sound. That said I am pretty happy.



Lyrics:

Oh Surgeon, My Surgeon…can you save me?
Oh Doctor, My Doctor…Lay your hands on me.

I’m going down, down, down, to a Deep Dark Hole, Full of:
Pain, Misery and Haunted things.
Left for the Dead, to Mock, and Swallow me.
My Machine… My My, Mah Mah, Machine

Oh Master My Master You ask so much of me.
All this Toil and War and Confusion…And Collapsing Buildings
You take me down, down, down…to follow you. I follow you.
Straight to the Machines

Machines My My Mah Mah, Machine

Your time has come to rise, Take your place…
We'll follow you, Our Flesh has failed
We’ll follow you straight to the machines

Machines My My Mah Mah, Machine

Here comes the Evolution Man Becomes Machine
Here comes a Transformation Man Becomes Machine