(Hip-hop) My last hope

[Jomama]

Hello i have made a song in reason lite and I was wondering what you think so if you could give me some feedback

[Mode7]

I only heard a 30 second extract (I don't have Spotify) but it's cool.

Maybe you should work that "gangsta lead" (sound like the Thor Preset). I think it's a little bit to high in the mix and that you can layer it with other synths (Combinator / subtractor Juicer II is a must to me : shiny, very versatile and pleasant). Then you should consider not laying it over every bar. I was doing like you before, but if you listen to some G-Funk records, you'll notice that those kind of leads are only played over 2-4 bars max, as a kind of climax.

Peace;