HIPHOP, remix, MED&HAVOC. Feedback welcome

[Dzkreet]

Hi, here is my latest.
All my beats are available for anyone who wants to rap over them or collab with me.
Cheers

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[JNeffLind]

I like your voice (or your singer's voice). Reminds me a bit of Ice T. Lyrics and beat are dope. To my ear, this song is lacking a real hook. It sounds good, but you need to find the part that is ear wormy and sticks in the listener's head and repeat that a few times. Just my two cents. Thanks for sharing.

[Dzkreet]

Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated.
Just so you know the rapping is not me, I took acapellas from two other songs:
First part of this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q9JMNRb9meM
Second part of this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M-ftvdbB-bk

The hooks of these songs did not fit with my instrumental