(Punk/Alt. Rock/Metal) You'll Never Take Me - New Mix / Master

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Tincture
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13 Sep 2015



https://www.soundcloud.com/tincture-1/y ... -mixmaster

Hopefully this sounds more powerful now (Hi drum freqs are what they are ;) ). And hopefully I've not misled on the genre too much ;) Let me know if so.

Lyrics:
You know they're coming
And I know they're coming
They're coming to take me away
Yes, far away

x2 (2nd x4)

Here comes the special jacket
with the extra long sleeves
Here comes the jacket with the extra long...

You'll never take me
They'll never take me

x2 (2nd ^^)

My new room is so comfortable and cosy
The walls are all padded but there is no window
But that is OK, 'cause I don't plan to stay!

^^

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Bloma
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14 Sep 2015

Nice production, sounds really heavy! The symphonic element sounds good too. Reminds me a bit of the newer Darkthrone albums, which I really like. Even reminds me of some Satyricon, dunno if you're into those bands. Something about the vocals sounded a bit out of time, like after the beat slightly. Maybe the processing on them is delaying them? Sometimes when I autotune it delays it slightly. Good flow and structure, maybe the end could explode a bit more to really blow your head off? THEYLLL NEVER TAAAKE MEEEEEEEEEE BLURRRRRRRRRRRR

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