(Rock) Don't Talk To Me

[liampatrickingram]

Hi everybody, I just finished a new song "Don't Talk To Me." This is a rough edit because I'd love some feedback. Thanks for listening!

Liam

[challism]

You have a nice voice, bro.

[challism]

Maybe around 1:18 you could put some drum fills in there, and some different high hat patterns.

I love the way you bring the drums back in at 2:30-ish, and I really like the guitar work from there on out. Very nice playing. And the double guitars are cool, too.

[liampatrickingram]

Maybe around 1:18 you could put some drum fills in there, and some different high hat patterns.

I love the way you bring the drums back in at 2:30-ish, and I really like the guitar work from there on out. Very nice playing. And the double guitars are cool, too.

Thanks for your input! I will try out some fills for that part particularly on the hi hat. Thanks for listening,

Liam

[eusti]

You have a nice voice, bro.

I agree! Top stuff!

The only thing that I dislike was the high synth / whistling sound at the beginning...
Made me think I had the kettle on and I'd forgotten!

D.

[DeltaHotelVictory]

Nice stuff especially if you call this just a rough edit. Great voice and great playing! I wish I could do it and I wish we would hear more music like this on this forum. I like the high synth by the way, it's just enough, sounds quite tasteful to me actually.

[liampatrickingram]

thanks for the feedback!

Liam

[Rice]

Great sound, really enjoyed listening.