Please Listen to my new song, constructive criticism would be welcome.

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normen
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14 Jun 2015

Sounds nice but the drums seem compressed to a point where they'd fit better to a dubstep song than this relaxed music. Also a bit overdone on the sum limiting/compressing IMO. Otherwise really nice, the instruments all seem to have their place, nice stereo base.

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Benedict
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14 Jun 2015

Hi Dean

I'm with Normen on the drums being too squished. Small and understated is good for this song but you need a more expanded feel.

Also the vocals are completely buried. Lift them above so the song keeps its purpose. Then I you will have a charming song.

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am0eba
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15 Jun 2015

I like it. Hope you don't take this the wrong way, but in my mind, I'm hearing a mashup of The Cure and The Archies! I mean that in the best way possible… Very interesting. Like the lyrics a lot.

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_Dave_

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