A sunny day on a journey that ends too soon

[jappe]

Tried to mix this in Sennheiser HD25-1 ii headphones.

http://phead.mu/s/TFhR7pqF

[Carly(Poohbear)]

Goes a little messy at 1:00, like the change at 1:20, bit messy again at 1:50'ish.
Overall sorry to say it does not flow for me....

Listened with Sennheisser HD202

[jappe]

Goes a little messy at 1:00, like the change at 1:20, bit messy again at 1:50'ish.
Overall sorry to say it does not flow for me....

Listened with Sennheisser HD202

Thank's for the feedback!
With messy I think you refer to chords that blend into each other?
Or is it the fast chord progression?
I was unsure about if should make the chord progression more distinct, but I decided to let it blend because I wanted it as some kind of complex harmonic background.
I'm still unsure about the arrangement - as usual.

[Carly(Poohbear)]

messy as in the way it blends at 1:00 and the fast chord progression at 1:50.. and hence for me it breaks the flow... (still like the change at 1:20  

[jappe]

messy as in the way it blends at 1:00 and the fast chord progression at 1:50.. and hence for me it breaks the flow... (still like the change at 1:20 &nbsp

Ok thank's; Coming back to this tune now, listening through Genelect, I can hear that it is messy indeed.
Putting this on my Big Pile of Tunes To Fix.