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Carly(Poohbear)
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Post 08 Feb 2015

Nice journey, at first I thought there were too many breaks but it works and flows well..

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eusti
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Post 08 Feb 2015

Cool! I like it! Reminds me of Kraftwerk in regards to the melody in parts!
Doesn't feel limited in any way! ;)

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Higor
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Post 08 Feb 2015

Reminds me of The Revenge Of Shinobi Sega Genesis Game. :thumbup:

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selig
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Post 09 Feb 2015

Cool track!

Don't know if this was intentional or not, but you seem to be missing the bottom few octaves, energy wise (a technical, not musical observation). I can turn my sub on and off and not really hear any difference! 

With such a relatively high bass line you can supercharge the kick. Or you could add a sub oscillator to the bass line. Or maybe it's there, but just not boosted? Either way, there's loads of room to work with here IMO. :)


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darkmode
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Post 09 Feb 2015

GeorgeFeb wrote: Thanks Giles!

Not intentional per se, I just trying to keep things as simple as possible, once I even forgot to write a bass for a track, lol!

Since I'm making music with these guys Image   bass can be tricky to make! :)

Or it's an excuse!
But in this track yes, my bass is on C3 because of its sound & because of the notes arrangement I can't add either second line (it won't sound) or add some other bass notes to the C2 as I sometimes do!

Hope it makes sense! :D
I like it. Considering that these are your monitors, it's really good. Nice work!

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selig
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Post 09 Feb 2015

GeorgeFeb wrote: Thanks Giles!

Not intentional per se, I just trying to keep things as simple as possible, once I even forgot to write a bass for a track, lol!

Since I'm making music with these guys Image   bass can be tricky to make! :)

Or it's an excuse!
But in this track yes, my bass is on C3 because of its sound & because of the notes arrangement I can't add either second line (it won't sound) or add some other bass notes to the C2 as I sometimes do!

Hope it makes sense! :D
Indeed, great work then! The most common problem for folks with "bass shy" monitoring is adding too much bass. You've avoided that completely, which is good IMO. I'd rather hear a good mix like yours that only lacks some low end (and can be considered a personal preference) than a muddy mix with too much low end (muddy is never a personal preference as far as I've seen!). 


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stratatonic
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Post 09 Feb 2015

Cool riff mate. Funky. :)

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