Lost it Once

[Leighbeater]

came together pretty quickly, probably not all in key and didn't really mix or master it, just stuck it up on sound cloud first song i have posted so hopefully sound cloud embed works :comp:   

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[jappe]

Hello!

The bells are nice for a while, but then they become annoying: too long. And there's little direction and progression in the tune.
Drums sounds nice.
Keep them coming!

[Carly(Poohbear)]

lost me a bit during that one, felt at the 1:30'ish mark the bell and everything came together and then really it was time to take it in a different direction which it did not do.

Stick with it as you have something there which could be great....