Neural-Ink (post-downtempo/rock/idk)

[guitfnky]

I wrote a song about conspiracy theories.

[selig]

OK, you sucked me in with the totally unexpected (and well executed) intro transition! Nice mood throughout, liking your vocal approach here too!

[guitfnky]

OK, you sucked me in with the totally unexpected (and well executed) intro transition! Nice mood throughout, liking your vocal approach here too!

much thanks, Selig—appreciate the kind words!

[Jagwah]

I wrote a song about conspiracy theories.

Amazing, really blown away by it. It's insane and tidy at the same time. The merging of the gritty synth bass is just great, the way it plays next to that big pluck is so nice, I wanted to hear more of it or have it turned into a riff and repeated I liked it that much. Feels very unique yet very comfortable. I like how you are using it to push your message. The spaces and mixing are great. Really well done.

[guitfnky]

I wrote a song about conspiracy theories.

Amazing, really blown away by it. It's insane and tidy at the same time. The merging of the gritty synth bass is just great, the way it plays next to that big pluck is so nice, I wanted to hear more of it or have it turned into a riff and repeated I liked it that much. Feels very unique yet very comfortable. I like how you are using it to push your message. The spaces and mixing are great. Really well done.

wow, thanks so much for such kind, thoughtful feedback—very much appreciated!

[Chizmata]

I wrote a song about conspiracy theories.

wow, fantastic song. interesting topic, great instrumentation that switches between very different, but totally sense-making parts very naturally. also the overall progression is spot on. i just feel like the vocals are not really cutting through, they work very well as contribution to the atmosphere, but i had problems understanding the lyrics.

[guitfnky]

I wrote a song about conspiracy theories.

wow, fantastic song. interesting topic, great instrumentation that switches between very different, but totally sense-making parts very naturally. also the overall progression is spot on. i just feel like the vocals are not really cutting through, they work very well as contribution to the atmosphere, but i had problems understanding the lyrics.

thank you so much—glad you enjoyed it! I agree with you on the vocal level in a couple of spots. I might put many of the recent songs I’ve done on an album, and thought about going back to tighten up some of the things that could be improved. could be a good opportunity for this one.