New song which I can’t get a ending too feedback requested

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gritz
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Post 16 Sep 2021


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bxbrkrz
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Post 16 Sep 2021

Keep it as is. Get rid of that click at the end. Automate a reverb fading out, to taste :puf_smile:
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Axiom 23
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Post 19 Sep 2021

Hi!
Lovely music. To me it sounded like a love story, southern france in the late seventies. Very cool! About the end. Maybe slowly fade out everything in the mix apart from the lonely chime-like sound doing a melody in the back, behind the guitar.

gritz
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Post 19 Sep 2021

Thanks for your feedback on this liking the imagery with the seventies France idea, left with my singer to see what he can creat lyrically - need a change a solo and maybe key change to end - the odd string sound and strings and all slowed down Indian Bollywood strings so interesting how France came up - thanks again

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moofi
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Post 21 Sep 2021

You could aswell wait till you got it together with the singer and let it end on a standing note singingwise in combination with a longer reverb tail at the end.

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Benedict
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Post 27 Sep 2021

I agree, pretty track and "France in the summer" is as good as anything else for sure. It definitely fits.
As for how it ends, too early to say seeing parts are still missing. You can't finish (incl mix) a track until all the parts are there.

Well, I guess you can finish early, but what if the new part brings an idea that wasn't there before and because you think you have finished it already, you don't allow that idea?

:-)

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