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danc
Posts: 1024
Joined: 14 Oct 2016

06 Aug 2021

Thumbs up! Liking the progression, melody and overall sound. Like the bassline and drums etc. Like woops, scratches, vox etc.
And then I like that you leave the thing to drift and linger from 4:24 onwards.

Some personal constructive opinions.. I think the lead is just a little too loud (starting around :57) - only by a few decibel - think it might sit better if it was pulled back a tiny bit.

Also - I think your Soundcloud link is broken. I had to find you on SC and get to the track that way (EDIT: The link seems to work now - ignore that last comment)
Check my Soundcloud:

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nooomy
Posts: 543
Joined: 16 Jan 2015

06 Aug 2021

danc wrote:
06 Aug 2021
Thumbs up! Liking the progression, melody and overall sound. Like the bassline and drums etc. Like woops, scratches, vox etc.
And then I like that you leave the thing to drift and linger from 4:24 onwards.

Some personal constructive opinions.. I think the lead is just a little too loud (starting around :57) - only by a few decibel - think it might sit better if it was pulled back a tiny bit.

Also - I think your Soundcloud link is broken. I had to find you on SC and get to the track that way (EDIT: The link seems to work now - ignore that last comment)
Hey!
Thanks for the feedback, I will try and see how it sounds like when I tone back the leadstabs around 57

Edit: i lowered it 3-4 db :)

danc
Posts: 1024
Joined: 14 Oct 2016

06 Aug 2021

nooomy wrote:
06 Aug 2021
danc wrote:
06 Aug 2021
Thumbs up! Liking the progression, melody and overall sound. Like the bassline and drums etc. Like woops, scratches, vox etc.
And then I like that you leave the thing to drift and linger from 4:24 onwards.

Some personal constructive opinions.. I think the lead is just a little too loud (starting around :57) - only by a few decibel - think it might sit better if it was pulled back a tiny bit.

Also - I think your Soundcloud link is broken. I had to find you on SC and get to the track that way (EDIT: The link seems to work now - ignore that last comment)
Hey!
Thanks for the feedback, I will try and see how it sounds like when I tone back the leadstabs around 57

Edit: i lowered it 3-4 db :)
Just re-listened - I think you've pulled back too far!! Somewhere in-between is needed.
Check my Soundcloud:

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