Thanks Bloma. If I knew then what I know now, I would've approach things differently. So thats what I'm doing in the current project I am working on. Stay tuned!

Thanks for listening and breaking down the track, Aggie! You got a few great pointers there which are useful. Especially about that off-key part. You were right. It indeed is a little bit off-key. Too bad you were a little bit dissapointed about the end, but you know: all good things come to an end ;)

Inspired by Daft Punk's classic Alive, I made this track a while ago in R5, before upgrading to R8.
Pls help me become a better producer and provide some constructive feedback!

I like it. I wonder what the acoustic version sounds like

Nice! Remember that late 80's videogame Outrun?

I thank u.
Appreciated!

You nailed it imo!
Since I like the heavier types of music, I immediately felt tracks like Android God, Rainman and Menace.
If you would've for instance distort the vox more, these tracks were very much comparable to some NIN tracks.
Wonder if you already signed to an indie label.
Keep it up!

You've got rhythm bro!

Good track. Well produced. I checked both versions. Non mastered was sub a little too much resulting in losing the other freqs. Mastered version had more room to breathe. Better! I liked the stab or gated pad after the break at 3:00. Gave me that let's-take- a-trip-through-space feeling. Good job. W...

Great revival of SoM! You got a RE of Dr. Avalanche there too?

Weird? Well, there's some self-knowledge ;) About the style: I think either you like it or you don't. In my case it has to sink in a little. Sink in, because the production itself is well done. I wouldnt expect a lesser quality after checking out the other tracks on your SC. Vox are in the right spo...

To the guys who missed this post at first.
Please give me your thoughts.
What would you do different?
What should I do or not do in the current track I am working on?
Your time, opinion and feedback is appreciated!

Nice!

Warm and relaxing like a hot bath.
I got that Moments in Love by Art of Noise-feeling after a while.
The pointers about the production itself are already given.
Learn from the feedback you get and you will become an Electronic Music God
Keep it up!

Thnx for your feedback guys! Anyone else wants to share his/her opinion about my track? Help me to become better :) @Bloma: your last sentence is what I am aiming for in the project I'm working on right now. I checked your SC. Nice stuff you made. Far away from mainstream imho. I especially liked Ea...

Hi guys,

Nice to meet you.
I am Ronald and I live in Amsterdam.
New to this forum and I am aiming to get and give constructive feedback on my and your tracks.
I am open to your feedback and suggestions. All kinds of, really!