Nice one. I like it. I think different drums/percussion (more organic and heavier, though not louder) would suit it better. At least, to me, the snare sounds too thin and uninteresting to be so upfront. And you won't read this much on here: it could do with being longer! :puf_bigsmile: I could try ...

Hey again, already posted about this in the other thread, but I really like this one. Good voice, clean production! So strange hearing that little tom on the offbeat like that. I've used it my self on a couple of tracks, but not sure where i got it from. Where did you get it from? Maybe it's just m...

Hey thats cool mate. Had a listen to both of them. Especially liked some of the Little Dragon stuff. Hadn't heard about either of them. Thanks. :) Had a listen to your stuff as well. Very cool! getting some Tribe Called Quest-y vibes from FYI. :clap: Sidenoting you back with who I'm listetening to ...

[media]https://soundcloud.com/sometinghelse/fyi[/media] So, if the last track was about my composition, this track is meant to be about my flow. Def not 'radio ready' (in quotes for obvious reasons), but i'm trying here. Any thoughts that could get me there would be appreciated, if you don't like it...

This is good stuff... Love your layering of the sounds... I'm still trying to figure out how to choose (and play) instruments so they don't compete for freq real estate, so I appreciate the dynamics. I believe your hip hop drums qualifies this as trip-hop... Butif they made a genre called synth-hop,...

It's kinda chill-wavey... this is beautiful... And right up my alley. Are you on spotify? I swear I've heard your handle before. I'm brand new to mixing and mastering, so I'm hardly a critic... But you pass the amateur bar with flying colors. Flying. Chill-wave! I would think the beat and rhythm wa...

Love your tones man. Airy guitars... This is an accomplishment. Well done. Truly. The mix so clean too.

This is great music. Makes me think of Thom Yorke, but older, less morose, and more reflective.

It's kinda chill-wavey... this is beautiful... And right up my alley. Are you on spotify? I swear I've heard your handle before. I'm brand new to mixing and mastering, so I'm hardly a critic... But you pass the amateur bar with flying colors. Flying.

This is dope. I dig it. I'm about 3:30 in and getting impatient for you to bring back the pad (saw?) that loops (arpeggiated, slightly off beat? ) at the very beginning... But against the industrial drums of the second half... Bringing that sound back at some point would really close it up I think.

A slice brother? Is this the theme for the new He-Man reboot? Lol very 80s! I like your melodies, and your vocals are sweet. I think you went too heavy on the 80s. Never go full 80s. It's the synths I think; overwhelming... omnipresent is the word.

No that's what it is now... In 2045 it'll just be folk, lol

I had posted the request for criticism here, and hoped to receive it here. Wasn't expecting it on the SoundCloud track itself. That might be my ego, tripping. Your words were appreciated, but somewhat final, and not as relevant (I think?) once I made the appropriate adjustments, so I deleted it to g...

Thank you, I've been debating doing more with it, I'll figure it out.

"mixing it better" is hard though lol... I imagine it takes knowledge and experience, two things I lack, but am working to acquire. Thank you for listening!

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11 minutes? is this typical of this genre? holy shit, lol... i love me some Nicolas Jaar too... but this is self-indulgent (perhaps the genre is?)... great effects, def art... I envisioned an interpretative dance the entire time Yes, it's a bit too short for the genre ... I dream of giving a sleep ...

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Bless up! Thank you! Follow/Follow on soundcloud/instagram, plenty more on the way!

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I hear you should eq your Reverb as well or some such. Great tips re making the vocals stand out, cause I had just cut more low, to demud them a bit and threw more RE202 exciter at them... Dynamic mic user, which I hear is a problem, but between my neighbours, my two dogs, my wife, my 3 year old, my...

Aiyah! Up, down, up, down! Who here likes money, and enjoys mixing? When I'm famous, I can pay you [emoji1787] Ty man, this one has been challenging for me as I have so many instruments in the same range... Piano, two guitars and the vocal. I prolly need to go watch more vids on separation technique...

Then maybe they don't realize how big of an issue this is and they need to put more people on to it. When you sell expensive software for professional use, which people depend on for their work and income, the product not working as intended should be your top priority. I haven't been able to work ...

Made a few changes, brought down the guitars and pianos, and tried to make the vocals stand out more with eq, thanks for listening guys!



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beautiful! This is my preferred listening.

not much to say that hasn't been said already... these tracks are superb, i love how you blend the acoustic with the electronic, sounds like folk music from 2045, lol

I like it! I feel like the synth solo that starts at about 3:00 could start a little sooner to condense it. It's almost like you left space for a verse before it, lol.

Excellent scene you have built, very charming.

Your mix is impressive! Drama all across the track, the music is solid, I like it man!

these tracks are crying for vocals!!!!!!!! CRYING!!!!! Beautiful work, this calm simmer the whole way through, expressive vocals would make it boil.